#1
Can someone help me write a chorus to this song. I only got the verses but I can't think of any thing to play along with the choruses. Here is what I already wrote:

Lead Guitar
e|------------------------------|
b|------------------------------|
g|--7-7-7-7-7-5-5-5-5-5--|
d|--7-7-7-7-7-5-5-5-5-5--|
a|--5-5-5-5-5-3-3-3-3-3--|
e|------------------------------|
|
|Rhythm Guitar
e|------------------------------|
b|------------------------------|
g|--7-7-7-7-7-5-5-5-5-5--|
d|--7-7-7-7-7-5-5-5-5-5--|
a|--5-5-5-5-5-3-3-3-3-3--|
e|------------------------------|
|
|Bass
g|------------------------------|
d|------------------------------|
a|--5-5-5-5-5-3-3-3-3-3--|
e|------------------------------|

Lead Guitar
e|------------------------------|
b|--9hb-9hb-9hb-7--------|
g|---------------------7fb-----|
d|------------------------------|
a|------------------------------|
e|------------------------------|
|
|Rhythm Guitar
e|------------------------------|
b|------------------------------|
g|--7-7-7-7-7-5-5-5-5-5--|
d|--7-7-7-7-7-5-5-5-5-5--|
a|--5-5-5-5-5-3-3-3-3-3--|
e|------------------------------|
|
|Bass
g|------------------------------|
d|------------------------------|
a|--5-5-5-5-5-3-3-3-3-3--|
e|-------------------------------|

Thanks in advanced.
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#3
Sounds like Green Day lol. Same guitar lines, same bass line...

Edit: The reason he has a Line 6 Spider.

And dude, you're just going to get laughed at on here with this. It's not very creative at all.
Last edited by GNRjungle87 at Oct 13, 2008,
#6
Your joking right?

Theres two chords its barely a verse... Im gonna go ahead and guess this is a punk song, i sure hope its not prog rock but...what kind of influences do you have in mind? Is the chorus louder or softer than the verse?

Its enough to ask someone else to write your song for you, but at least some influences would help to make a good job.

how about

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------55555555533333333333330003
------55555555533333333333330003
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and then at the end of that the lead guitar plays


12-12-12-12-10-10-10-14b(15)r14
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#7
Actually that was harsh of me we were all new to song writing once upon a time.


change your bassline and add in the 8 so it looks like
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55555533333888888888888855555
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Now it has three chords (C, A, F still a boring song) and i can write a chorus which ill think of over the next five minutes

EDIT: Then the chorus can have


-8---8----5----3----3--0---------------------
-8---8----0----0----3--1--------------------
-10-8----6----4----0--2---5-------------------
-10-10---0----0----0--2---5-----------------
-8--10---7-----5---0--0----3-----------------
-8--8-----0----0----3--0---------------------


Write your own uses of these chords, some are going to take a bit of work to phrase right but maybe thatll help you write something un-generic and perhaps enchance your imagination, when your in the next pink floyd give me a shout-out
Last edited by RedFez64 at Oct 13, 2008,
#8
woah dude
you arent very creative right?
try this chords in the chorus, kind of generic but they work
GDCE, do it with powerchords
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#9
Quote by RedFez64

Write your own uses of these chords, some are going to take a bit of work to phrase right but maybe thatll help you write something un-generic and perhaps enchance your imagination, when your in the next pink floyd give me a shout-out


RedFez64, you are the reason I love UG.