Those are both UG links.

Ok I'm impressed by the first song, especially considering your 14, but I see loads of potential there, I didn't see it coming. Lyrics could improve though.
Last edited by MiG_853 at Oct 14, 2008,
sounds pretty good. Guitar tone seems to need a bit of tweaking. Lyrics could also. But it sounds pretty good. nice job
it's cool to get other people's opinions so I want to ask specifically what you mean.... the lyrics themselves could improve or the singing in general?
Well both singing and lyrics, the lyrics are pretty typical and a bit cheesy, and the vocals are untrained, and oscillates too much tonally, but given your age it's all forgiveable.