Hell yeah very nicely played, you got all the riffs down. Your rhythm and lead is excellent. The mixing is pretty good too, the levels are almost spot on in a lot of places. Quality / drums could be improved, but for a rushed job this is great. I'd say keep going, this song is one of my favorites on that album.
Love the tone for the lead man. Just put off that vibe you get from listening to the original. Excecution is definitley there. By far one of the best I've heard so far. Fixing to listen to your Cyanide version now.
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that was pretty cool, man! all the chord changes were right on with good lead tone! good one, dude!