#1
Saddled on a prepotent steed,
Not looking at, but looking through
You kick the spurs and disappear,
Clouding subservient view

Passing judgement upon he who stands,
Blinded by conceit, your conscious mind
Alone he stands by unfaltered view,
Unperplexed by what or who

Gratification of one’s own self,
Infantile smugness of none but you


The third stanza/verse is uncompleted, as I'm having trouble thinking of the wording, but it's along the lines of "He is a selfless man of love, caring of others before himself."


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Last edited by Ezuma at Oct 17, 2008,
#2
I actually quite like this, not the subject in particular-it's not something that would normally appeal to me, but it's got a very attractive rythmn to it.
“I smoke. If this bothers anyone, I suggest you look around at the world in which we live and shut your f*ckin' mouth.” RIP
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#3
Lyrics now finished.


Saddled on a prepotent steed,
Not looking at, but looking through
You kick the spurs and disappear,
Clouding subservient view

Passing judgement upon he who stands,
Blinded by conceit, your conscious mind
Gratification of one’s own self,
Infantile smugness of none but you

He alone stands by unfaltering view,
Unperplexed by what or who
Selfless, he is solicitous to please,
Unrequited admiration for those who

Take the punishment for,
Things not undertaken by,
Themselves, or anyone,
But you
#4
try not to use words most peole have to look up in the dictionary. if u wanna appeal to the common listener....stick with the average joes english. thats all i'd have to say