#1
For Jessica, Because I sit beside her in maths.

Maths teachers always
Have their backs turned
Kiss me, touch me quickly
Because 'It is very important
That we know this next equation'
Last edited by Dylan_ at Oct 15, 2008,
#2
There's a cute quick text hidden in that, but i'm having a feeling that there's still things to do if you wanna give that little cozy feeling the text could hold.
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#4
drop the speach marks, you don't need them, and I'd suggest adding another stanza. This is very good so far though, its just too short. I want to hear more. Which is good. Check out some of mine if your bored.
#5
The speech marks are because it's what my teacher said when i was thinking about this girl jessica, and it's what woke me up kind of cause I was day dreaming, if you get me lol