#1
Hopefully it's not too generic (aside from the breakdowns, of course).

C4C.
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#2
I don't know why no one has commented on this one yet.

I for one loved the breakdowns, and the song in general. In my opinion nothing needs to be changed about this song, this is as close to perfection as it gets man kudos!

15/10
#3
Good rhythm^^

The bar 39 riff it's amazing, heavy and rhythmical

Beautifull piece, nothing to crit

8.5/10

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#4
The first bar or two of the sweep solo felt very out of place, but then it kind of locked in made more sense musically.

Other than that, very cool. It had an awesome rhythmic intensity all the way through, which is my favorite kind of riffs.
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#5
I just posted a song called No more metalcore. lol but this song was f**ckin sweet, I cant find anything that I didnt like, except the solo was kind of bland. other than that it was good.
9/10
#6
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I just posted a song called No more metalcore. lol but this song was f**ckin sweet, I cant find anything that I didnt like, except the solo was kind of bland. other than that it was good.
9/10


Thanks. But the sweeps weren't intended to be a solo, there will be vocals over it.
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killswitch engage has some dissonant riffs, they're kind grindcore tho

#9
Breakdown is really cool, it has a really good rhythm to it. Very catchy. Sweeping was really good imo, looks difficult, but then again I'm not the best at sweeping =p. Everything was really well thought out. Transitions were top notch and everything. But around like 23, that's the only part that doesn't sound as good as the rest of the song. At least from guitar 1. That's the only part I think you could have improved on. Otherwise 9/10.
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#10
really nice work on the chorus, altough i dont liked the intro. the bridge after chorus is really good. uhmmm the downfall, of this song i think is the sweeping part. ok i say, use sweep, use arpeggios, i use them too, and everybody, but it dont fits right in there. the strong is a great 8/10 keep up the good work

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#11
o_o...

Teach me to sweep like that?

no?

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10/10
loved it.