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One of my older songs,
meant to be sung by harsh, Inhaled vocals.--parethesis ()
and melodic female vocals.

Struggles and argues
with subconciousness
wondering if you'll ever
be the best,
(Blood!)
Trickles down your neck,
(Purity!)
Holy water on your chest

theres blood on my face
(and I can't see)
there's water in my lungs,
(so I can't breathe)
my heart is empty
so I can't feel
(I can't breathe)
(But I still love you)

(Struggling!)
but to no avail
there's no breaking out of these chains
(Torture!)
but to no avail
(my whole body's numb)

theres blood on my face
(and I can't see)
there's water in my lungs,
(so I can't breathe)
my heart is empty
so I can't feel
(I can't breathe)
(But I still love you)

You spit in my face
(But I don't see why!)
You hold me under
(but I dont cry!)
I can't breathe, {together}
But I still love you! {together}

crit4crit,
if youd like to see my other works, links in siggy.
thanks in advance.