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I wanted to try a Slayer-type style with this piece, and I wrote the music for it before I wrote the lyrics. The music is a bit like Angel Of Death, and supposed to be screamed for most of it. I've added the time at the side, and the whole song is 3:07. Well, enjoy, and crit please!

Acoustic Intro (0:02)

Heavy Intro (0:23)

Verse I (0:52)
As we watch them walk away
From all they've destroyed and all we've created
We wait for the saviour's call
Of the victimised and the understated
This war world will never fortune find
In the darkened mist of the ages
And so will therefore continue
Writing the books and burning the pages

Chorus (1:10)
As we beg for more
Watch them from Hell's door
As they suffer so
Watch from down below
As we dance on your headstone

Preverse (1:19)

Verse II (1:31)
Just listen, the batterd souls
They cry from the grave "Redemption, redemption!"
As if they would know the gods
Reject those deceived and torn from ascension
Still tearing the hearts and minds
From what they beleive are sins of the power
While they're keeping score they tell you
"Live for the day and kill by the hour"

Chorus (1:49)
As we beg for more
Watch them from Hell's door
As they suffer so
Watch from down below
As we dance on your headstone

Heavy Break (1:59)

Breakdown (2:03)
Ju-sti-fied
Never gonna change my mind
Never gonna shift my soul
Never gonna take con-trol
All I see is a-go-ny
Every vision mi-se-ry
Demons rising up be-fore
Brining with them death and no-thing
MORE!

Preverse (2:21)

Verse III (2:30)
Resting in eternal silence
Nothing precedes and nothing will follow
Still no-one resists the darkness
Casting you down and into the hollow
And only the thoughts remain
Of those who were stained, broken and helpless
Those chosen to lead the fight
And those turned away and senteced to blackness

Out-Chorus (2:48)
As we beg for more
Watch them from Hell's door
As they suffer so
Watch from down below
Earth is torn apart
Crush the human heart
Death and nothing more
Watch from down below
As we dance on your headstone