#1
Hi guys i didn't know where to put this so i put it here don't ask me why i did the script it is a song i have heard so much so it popped up in my head is it alright give me constructive criticism please
here is the link
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Hardiment/
EDIT: Do note the mic is not a very expensive good one so it sounds a little off
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#2
So comments would be great guys
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#3
nobodies replying
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#4
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i went away and it was still in my head, that is a catchy tune...
I thought you done a good job mate, tho you can tell your voice is still young tho.
i enjoyed it, you hit the notes well...

crit: you can hear how much your trying, tho a proper mic with some effects cud sort that out, plus it was very exposed (brave stuff!) that's another thing, i thought you sounded slightly nervous...you have a good voice, and you can hit the notes, so you should build on your confidence...if that voice had confidence in it (dont over do it ) it'd be pretty good

hell, you're a better singer than me! altho thats not much of an acheivement

keep it up, have fun

thanks i will take that into consideration yes i do get nervous easily in terms of performing but im def working on that thats for the crit
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#5
more comments people please
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#7
whatever anyone says, dont stop singing. People can develop as singers even if they're awful. havent heard the recording though
#8
thanks for the comments i will never stop singing as i love it
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