#1
HI there , I recently had a few ideas on a three times seven one time eleven eights riff with a 4/4 drumbeat as a background , i'd be really interested in your opinions on this riff , also on the piece itself and the 4/4 5/8 riff , thanks in advance
C4C

Greymane
Attachments:
El Spanio.zip
#3
Interesting. The main acoustic guitar thing reminded me of 'Asturias' quite a bit, just the 11/8 at the end feels slightly tacked on as an afterthought, I'd opt for a more concise resolution. The buildup before the song really gets rolling takes abit too long, and when the distortion takes over it feels slightly pedestrian, as the riff doesn't offer much change yet. Will see how this develops, keep it up!