This is a song I started working on yesterday and finished today, it's comprised of a few different riffs but its at a very very rough stage right now. Perhaps you all could help me out,

The file will be attached below here is what I am having trouble with,
1. A better bass part, it seems kinda... floppy..
2. A better drum part, the drums right now are straight out of Smoke on The Water, which fit, but I am looking for something more original.
3. A better bridge/chorus, it just sounds off to me and I think it could be much better
4. Lyrics, I haven't decided what the song is going to be about, but if any of you have a topic that you think will fit well with the instruments please do tell.

So, comment, critique and help out if you can, and as always, you comment, I'll comment.
Random Song.zip