#1
Risen with a vengeance for the destruction of mankind
Disgusted, with anger due to corruption of human minds.
Greedy, and selfish, they really could care less
But now they’ll pay the price, we’ll leave their precious world a mess

Destroy!
Mankind!
How could
They be so blind?
Reining!
Terror!
On Them!
Feel no!
Remorse…

This will be the planet on which the sinners bleed
Buried under ash and skulls; we are the blackened seed
Of…

Hatred!
Anger!
Rein of!
Terror!
Blaspheme!
Danger!
Hall of!
Grotesque bludgeoning of this pathetic excuse for a species!
F*ck me!

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I don't like labelling myself or confining myself as a musician, so I'll just say that this song is death metal of some sort. Crits please. \m/
#2
I'm sorry, I don't intend to bump ( Yes, I know I am )
But I would just like to ask once more to be critted. I've noticed that I have gotten 31 views but nobody's said anything.
I really don't care if you enjoy the genre, but even any advice on wording would be appreciated. Thank you.