#1
This is my very first music composing.

I need some help in:

1. I can't seem to make the drum part (I'm clueless about using drum tabs)

2. I need some help for the bass in chorus

and feel free to critic
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#3
Quote by sbikram
how long have you been playing man...



umm... since june this year
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#4
just other peoples stuff for now...
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#5
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just other peoples stuff for now...



what'ya mean?
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#6
1. theres something called eighth and sixteenth notes. use them

2. after that, bump the tempo DOWN

3. use rests

4. stay in key!

5. keep at it, i know this is your first. skill will come with time, but this just isnt up to par man.
#8
this was the best i could do. its not meant to be offencive but the best way to get good is to play other peoples songs for awhile to learn chords and song structures.
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#9
Quote by ninja.kitty
1. theres something called eighth and sixteenth notes. use them

2. after that, bump the tempo DOWN

3. use rests

4. stay in key!

5. keep at it, i know this is your first. skill will come with time, but this just isnt up to par man.


What you mean by stay in key?
and i'm not that good at music theory etc. but thanx anyway

Quote by BKGMorley
this was the best i could do. its not meant to be offencive but the best way to get good is to play other peoples songs for awhile to learn chords and song structures.


That song actually helped.. thanx a bunch =)
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