Well done. Acoustic rhythm is nice, and solo is tasteful. Only thing that didn't sound so great was the occasional time when your voice's pitch dropped low, giving a bit too much of a rough growl, but that happened so infrequently that it doesn't matter. All in all, good song, and well done.
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That looks like a digestive biscuit that's been thrown up by a cat.
Guitar is nice, tune is nice, but as the guy above me said, when your voice goes growly... it's not so nice. I don't think the lyrics are so great either. In a song like this, using cliche ideas is a real problem since the lyrics are so at the forefront.

I'd love a crit on the song in my sig, if you have the time.
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!
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