This is something I cooked up a little while ago.

The song's a little repetetive without the lyrics, especially the last bit, but appreciate it nontheless :P

Cheers for any comments,
can i haz teh metalz.zip
that was extremely boring, like it was basically one riff the whole way through with a change in time sigs, and then a massive long breakdown
you just need alot more riffs for this... i like the thing you did at the beginning with the bass