#1
Verse1:

Now girl not known for a long time
but already wanna make you mine
just your hips and your eyes
makes me just lose my mind
Music is way to show how you feel
This new feelings is just unreal
But hey...


Chorus:

Music's in my soul
But your in my heart
i dunno wear to start.
but it's got me in a hold
is there any other way to say
how i feel about you.
that would make you see.


Verse 2:

Hold up, hold up.
can't belive what im seeing
An angel come down from heavan
wanna be with her 24/7
but sometime things just dont come true
but there nuttin i can do
so all i've got to say
is..


Chorus:

Music's in my soul
But your in my heart
i dunno wear to start.
but it's got me in a hold
is there any other way to say
how i feel about you.
that would make you see.


Sorry for the format, this is one of the 1st songs i wrote. i'll post more. I can see it not really that good but as i said 1st attempt and i am open to tips please. i really want to start writing songs.
#3
Is it? the line sounded familiar. But i just thought of them when i was in class once. Sorry if it is.