#1
They used to teach me to breath
When I'd get caught up with myself
So selfish,
If only
I could help it
But you're always there
Paper bag in hand
Waiting,
If only
I could breath if you'd leave me
I could breath if you'd leave me

They used to sit idly by when I got home
Wait for the stories I've got
Today
But no
Nothing's good when you feel so damn alone
Nothing's good when you feel so damn alone

Now where are you tonight
I've made a mistake and need some clarity
Cause I think i've gone and sold my soul
But if you can't tell me I'll never know
These shoulders have got more than they can hold
This head's so full surely it'll explode

They used to teach me to be better
Ignore the masses, all that bullshit
I know
Head high
I can do this
But you were always there
Crutches in the corner
Waiting
If only
I could walk if you'd leave me
I could walk if you'd leave me

They used to sit idly by when I got home
Wait for the stories I've got
Today,
but no
Nothing's good when you're the last out of a crowd
Nothing's good when you're last the out of a crowd

Now where are you tonight
I've made a mistake and need some clarity
Cause I think I've gone and sold my soul
But if you can't tell me I'll never know
These shoulders have got more than they can hold
This head's so full surely it'll explode

Surely it'll explode
Surely it'll explode
Nothing's good when you feel so damn alone
(Surely it'll explode)
Nothing's good when you're the last out of a crowd
(Surely it'll explode)
Wait for the story I've got today
(Surely it'll explode)
#2
i dont normally write about songs but i really like that . well done.
Can you tell me what process you go through when writing a song?
#3
great job
I really like how you don't rhyme very much
to me writing a good song without rhyming a lot takes talent
#4
Quote by morello#2
i dont normally write about songs but i really like that . well done.
Can you tell me what process you go through when writing a song?


Cheers for the response.
Ehh process? I've got words in my head and need to get them out, haha, I don't really have a process.....

Quote by bonehade
great job
I really like how you don't rhyme very much
to me writing a good song without rhyming a lot takes tal


Actually I thought I rhymed more than I usually do in this particular one, heh, but thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.

Going to try to get this one recorded with the band soon.
Thanks again for the responses guys, if you have anything I'll gladly read it...
#5
Going to try to get this one recorded with the band soon.


dude when you record it upload to UG , I really want to hear this finished.
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