#3
Quote by scott.flesch
Kinda cool, a little repetitive in my opinion. Some drums would really add a lot to the song. Some vocals with a lot of effects on them would be pretty cool as well as some synths. I really like the delay on the bass. Overall cool work, good job.

Crit Mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=981459


thkx for your ideas, that would make it really cool but im no good with drums, and that other stuff. maybe in the future lol
#4
Lol this is reminding me of the computer game Diablo II in the desert place but just a little faster. It seems really sort of dark which i guess covers the "freaky" part lol.

As for vocals just a soft voice talking under the music might sound cool and probably add to the freaky part haha. I agree with scott too though some drums would be good there to spice it up a little bit.

overall, pretty cool but it doesnt seem quite finished yet.

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#5
well, if anyone is interested in composing a drum track for the song.. lol i would appreciate it, and credit would be given of course
as for the voice, its a good idea, but its not something very doable for me right now (if anyone's also interested lol)

i'll try to work a bit more the guitar that has those two high notes and see if i can come up with some new lead riff or solo for the song.

thkx for all the comment till now