#1
I'd really appreciated some help on this;

A song in my profile; Lydian I think it's a decent start, I just don't know where to take it after the first chorus.

Is there a riff in the demo any of you think should immediately follow the chorus? Or do you think the vibe brings for a pause for a bass groove/drum fill/vox and then go into what riff?

Anyways I'd appreciate it, thanks.
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#2
tht was good i think u shld go back into the beginning riffs for a second time then put down a sik breakdown and follow out into a solo. thts just my opinion good luk wit the song.
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#3
What riffs were you talkin about? Thanks for listening, I just don't want to follow the same, Intro, main riff, verse riff, chorus, verse, bridge, outro structure. I don't want it to be WAAAAY outside the box in terms of structure, but ya know, just not the same ole, same ole.
Amps
Mesa Dual Recto 3 Ch
Peavey 6505 Combo

Cab
ENGL E212VH Cab

Guitars
Epi Explorer
Schecter Damien 6
Squier Strat (signed by Rob Zombie!)

Pedals
ISP Decimator
Dunlop Crybaby Original
Boss CE-5 Chorus Ensenble
Boss GE-7 Equalizer