#1
Well as the title says im trying to write something in a similar style as used on the newer final fantasy, star ocean games.

With me being primarily a metal musician its kinda started learning that way.

anyways enough talk.

The track is on my profile.

All feedback/hatred is greatly appreciated as it helps me to improve.
#2
Hey there.
Interesting tune you got there!!
I didn't think that it was too bad, the guitar riffs at the end were pretty sweet.
My only Negative thing about it would be that for some reason, and I am not 100% sure why, but the intro acoustics are not working for me. They sound good and all, but I dunno ... Can't really explain why.


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GEAR:
SCHECTER "Diamond Series" REVENGER Guitar
VOX AD30VT Amp
ZOOM HD16CD Digital Mulit-Track Recorder
1 SHURE SM-57,1 Audio-Technica AT2035, 1 APEX 435 Mic. & 2 APEX 180 Condencer Mics
Edited with Audacity & Adobe Audition 3