#2
i thought it sounded pretty good, some parts seemed a little rushed, but outside of that sounded good
Gear:
Ibanez PC5
Ibanez RG120
Peavey Vypry 15w
#5
Quote by JensKlooster
Thanks, could you tell me which parts were rushed?


Think he means the part just before you play the harmonics, there you skip a couple of notes. I also don't know why you switch to 4/4 measure at the end.
#6
I think overall it was very well done, but i you don't let it ring out enough.

For example:

You take your fingers off the B and G strings when playing little e string pulloffs.

At this part:

Hold down them 5's and 7's and make it glorious!

|-------2p0-----------0--|
|-----5-----5-------5----|
|---5---------5---5------|
|------------------------|
|-0-------------0--------|
|------------------------|

|-------------0h3p0-----|
|-5-5-5-----5-------5---|
|-5-5-5---5-----------5-|
|-----------------------|
|-0-2-3-3---------------|
|-----------------------|

|-----------0h5p0---------|
|-5-7-----7-------7p0-0h5-|
|-5-7---7-----------------|
|-------------------------|
|-3-5-5-------------------|
|-------------------------|