i thought it sounded pretty good, some parts seemed a little rushed, but outside of that sounded good
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Quote by JensKlooster
Thanks, could you tell me which parts were rushed?

Think he means the part just before you play the harmonics, there you skip a couple of notes. I also don't know why you switch to 4/4 measure at the end.
I think overall it was very well done, but i you don't let it ring out enough.

For example:

You take your fingers off the B and G strings when playing little e string pulloffs.

At this part:

Hold down them 5's and 7's and make it glorious!