#1
heavy metal is as descriptive as i can be, cuz its the first song that ive written in a while that isnt metalcore

anyway, its influenced by bands like megadeth, children of bodom, and (although metalcore) as i lay dying.

its in my profile called untitled new or new untitled or something like that...

c4c as always
Last edited by jetfuel495 at Oct 22, 2008,
#2
no offense dude, but it doesn't really sound like megadeth or children of bodom at all (well, at least their earlier i.e. good stuff). It sounds a lot like as i lay dying which is shit. don't kid yourself... its a metalcore song
We're the Hate Crew, we'll stand and we wont fall
We're all for none and none for all
F*** you we'll fight till the last hit
And we sure as hell, ain't takin no s***
Last edited by metalreaper450 at Oct 22, 2008,
#3
Quote by metalreaper450
no offense dude, but it doesn't really sound like megadeth or children of bodom at all (well, at least their earlier i.e. good stuff). It sounds a lot like as i lay dying which is shit. don't kid yourself... its a metalcore song


influenced doesnt necessarily means it sounds like it.

the prechorus riff was taken directly from a certain riff in lake bodom, played a few octaves down and in a different key. maybe youd recognize it if you listened hard enough.

and good job being constructive.
#4
Well let me start off by saying that you have some cool riffs in here. I also noticed the Bodom-esque riff at 1:13. There are a few times where the guitar track and the drum track seem a little out of sync principally at 0:40, 0:50, and 1:39. Maybe you should slow down the drumtrack a little and re-record the guitar track. There's some cool chugging riffs in here but some times it can get just a little monotonous. I really liked the last riff of the song as it was very spot-on. Overall great job, c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=984182