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#1
Ok this has probably been done before, many times, but never by me.

Anyway, one of the things I want to do with the guitar is cover the popular song Chocolate Rain by Tay Zonday.

If you have not seen it
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EwTZ2xpQwpA

Ok, so I want to cover that song on the guitar, but I don't want to use the same lyrics he did, for obvious reasons. So here I am, in the pit for suggestions. So this song is for you pitmonkeys.

Its quite simple really, just post what you think should be a line in the song.

Rules:
1.) Anything goes (and I mean anything, internet memes welcome)
2.) no lyrics from the actual song (and preferably not from other covers as well)
3.) preferably no reference to anyone's names

warning: Anything you say can and may be used as a lyric, even if you didn't mean it to be.

Note: I do not plan to make any money or anything off of this I just want to do this for fun. If I need a copyright or something to do this, sorry.

So yeah, have fun, and if you guys want to, I may put it on my profile when its done.

So to start, here is my lyric:

Chocolate Rain-This is the Pit we are #1

Ok, here is where we are so far:

Chocolate Rain-This is the Pit we are #1
Chocolate Rain-First post goes to me, and I enjoy tacos

Chocolate Rain - My songs suck and I think I'm a meme
Chocolate Rain - My house is where she will go for fun

Chocolate Rain-someone should record a rock version of that song
Chocolate Rain- I Cum Blood and I'll never fap the same

Chocolate Rain-Good job. You wrote that yourself?
Chocolate Rain-fap once, fap twice, fap once again

Chocolate Rain-Some stay dry and others don't
Chocolate Rain-I searched and can't find them

Chocolate Rain-snorting crack goes right into your brain
Chocolate Rain-I like to dance when I take meh trousers off.

Chocolate Rain-Beautiful, isn't it
Chocolate Rain-I remember the vocals in chocolate rain being better than this

Chocolate Rain-The searchbar retards don't know how to use
Chocolate Rain-But it's a wh0re everyone uses it

Chocolate Rain-the porno shop next door is up for rent
Chocolate Rain-tastes like a waffle?

Chocolate Rain-the LOL WUT pear it only gets you banned
Chocolate Rain-Its gone dude, sucks to be him

Chocolate Rain-i love circle jerking, even when it causes emotional pain.
Chocolate Rain-Oh man, Oh god, OH MAN , OH GOD!!!

Chocolate Rain-I kill then rape
Chocolate Rain-another name for a rooster starts with a c and ends with k

Chocolate Rain- i just cummed blood on my toy airplaine
Chocolate Rain- i cum chocotale blood in pain

Chocolate Rain- lol lol wut your insane
Chocolate Rain- Better than Vanilla Ice

Chocolate Rain-Want Some Jello Lolol
Chocolate Rain-Rock version's been done, really well too.

Chocolate Rain- Whammy without a whammy bar epic fails
Chocolate Rain- oh my God I see tits on a whale

Chocolate Rain- Tom ran fast, but not enough,
Chocolate Rain- Russel, what the ****

Chocolate Rain-on pants there is a cum blood stain
Chocolate Rain-without pics it didnt happen

Chocolate Rain - some grow hair and others stay the same
Chocolate Rain - YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!


Going good, keep at it
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

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Last edited by RazorTheAwesome at Oct 24, 2008,
#2
First post goes to me, and I enjoy tacos.
Voodoo Fest 2008 <3

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SILENCE.

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#4
Chocolate Rain - My house is where she will go for fun
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Because nothing is sexier than a man with a mouth full of crayons.

Cool.
#5
someone should record a rock version of that song
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this is UG
of course they're going to say
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iT i5 TeH p\/\/naG3!!!

but yeah its fine
#6
Chocolate Rain
Some stay dry and others feel the pain
Chocolate Rain
A baby born will die before the sin

Chocolate Rain
The school books say it can't be here again
Chocolate Rain
The prisons make you wonder where it went

Chocolate Rain
Build a tent and say the world is dry
Chocolate Rain
Zoom the camera out and see the lie

Chocolate Rain
Forecast to be falling yesterday
Chocolate Rain
Only in the past is what they say

Chocolate Rain
Raised your neighborhood insurance rates
Chocolate Rain
Makes us happy 'livin in a gate

Chocolate Rain
Made me cross the street the other day
Chocolate Rain
Made you turn your head the other way

(Chorus)
Chocolate Rain
History quickly crashing through your veins
Chocolate Rain
Using you to fall back down again
[Repeat]

Chocolate Rain
Seldom mentioned on the radio
Chocolate Rain
Its the fear your leaders call control

Chocolate Rain
Worse than swearing worse than calling names
Chocolate Rain
Say it publicly and you're insane

Chocolate Rain
No one wants to hear about it now
Chocolate Rain
Wish real hard it goes away somehow

Chocolate Rain
Makes the best of friends begin to fight
Chocolate Rain
But did they know each other in the light?

Chocolate Rain
Every February washed away
Chocolate Rain
Stays behind as colors celebrate

Chocolate Rain
The same crime has a higher price to pay
chocolate Rain
The judge and jury swear it's not the face

(Chorus)

Chocolate Rain
Dirty secrets of economy
Chocolate Rain
Turns that body into GDP

Chocolate Rain
The bell curve blames the baby's DNA
Chocolate Rain
But test scores are how much the parents make

Chocolate Rain
'Flippin cars in France the other night
Chocolate Rain
Cleans the sewers out beneath Mumbai

Chocolate Rain
'Cross the world and back its all the same
Chocolate Rain
Angels cry and shake their heads in shame

Chocolate Rain
Lifts the ark of paradise in sin
Chocolate Rain
Which part do you think you're 'livin in?

Chocolate Rain
More than 'marchin more than passing law
Chocolate Rain
Remake how we got to where we are
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^ you are wise


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There's been sooo many threads done on this; I don't even wanna hear that you used the searchbar. Staring at it and giggling does not count.
The worlds fu cked up and we lit the fuse, its all used up what you gonna do?
#7
Quote by Supertait
Chocolate Rain
Some stay dry and others feel the pain
Chocolate Rain
A baby born will die before the sin

Chocolate Rain
The school books say it can't be here again
Chocolate Rain
The prisons make you wonder where it went

Chocolate Rain
Build a tent and say the world is dry
Chocolate Rain
Zoom the camera out and see the lie

Chocolate Rain
Forecast to be falling yesterday
Chocolate Rain
Only in the past is what they say

Chocolate Rain
Raised your neighborhood insurance rates
Chocolate Rain
Makes us happy 'livin in a gate

Chocolate Rain
Made me cross the street the other day
Chocolate Rain
Made you turn your head the other way

(Chorus)
Chocolate Rain
History quickly crashing through your veins
Chocolate Rain
Using you to fall back down again
[Repeat]

Chocolate Rain
Seldom mentioned on the radio
Chocolate Rain
Its the fear your leaders call control

Chocolate Rain
Worse than swearing worse than calling names
Chocolate Rain
Say it publicly and you're insane

Chocolate Rain
No one wants to hear about it now
Chocolate Rain
Wish real hard it goes away somehow

Chocolate Rain
Makes the best of friends begin to fight
Chocolate Rain
But did they know each other in the light?

Chocolate Rain
Every February washed away
Chocolate Rain
Stays behind as colors celebrate

Chocolate Rain
The same crime has a higher price to pay
chocolate Rain
The judge and jury swear it's not the face

(Chorus)

Chocolate Rain
Dirty secrets of economy
Chocolate Rain
Turns that body into GDP

Chocolate Rain
The bell curve blames the baby's DNA
Chocolate Rain
But test scores are how much the parents make

Chocolate Rain
'Flippin cars in France the other night
Chocolate Rain
Cleans the sewers out beneath Mumbai

Chocolate Rain
'Cross the world and back its all the same
Chocolate Rain
Angels cry and shake their heads in shame

Chocolate Rain
Lifts the ark of paradise in sin
Chocolate Rain
Which part do you think you're 'livin in?

Chocolate Rain
More than 'marchin more than passing law
Chocolate Rain
Remake how we got to where we are


That is against the rules dumbass

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someone should record a rock version of that song


that is what I am doing
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

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RazorTheAwesome, if I was a Ditto, I'd transform into YOU

Quote by Kensai
Basically god wanted to punish people for getting educated/eating apples.

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We all desire a little pussy.
#9
^^^ Good job. You wrote that yourself? I'm in awe of both your incredible originality and boundless lyric-writing potential.

Dumbass.
#10
Quote by Supertait
Chocolate Rain
Some stay dry and others feel the pain
Chocolate Rain
A baby born will die before the sin

Chocolate Rain
The school books say it can't be here again
Chocolate Rain
The prisons make you wonder where it went

Chocolate Rain
Build a tent and say the world is dry
Chocolate Rain
Zoom the camera out and see the lie

Chocolate Rain
Forecast to be falling yesterday
Chocolate Rain
Only in the past is what they say

Chocolate Rain
Raised your neighborhood insurance rates
Chocolate Rain
Makes us happy 'livin in a gate

Chocolate Rain
Made me cross the street the other day
Chocolate Rain
Made you turn your head the other way

(Chorus)
Chocolate Rain
History quickly crashing through your veins
Chocolate Rain
Using you to fall back down again
[Repeat]

Chocolate Rain
Seldom mentioned on the radio
Chocolate Rain
Its the fear your leaders call control

Chocolate Rain
Worse than swearing worse than calling names
Chocolate Rain
Say it publicly and you're insane

Chocolate Rain
No one wants to hear about it now
Chocolate Rain
Wish real hard it goes away somehow

Chocolate Rain
Makes the best of friends begin to fight
Chocolate Rain
But did they know each other in the light?

Chocolate Rain
Every February washed away
Chocolate Rain
Stays behind as colors celebrate

Chocolate Rain
The same crime has a higher price to pay
chocolate Rain
The judge and jury swear it's not the face

(Chorus)

Chocolate Rain
Dirty secrets of economy
Chocolate Rain
Turns that body into GDP

Chocolate Rain
The bell curve blames the baby's DNA
Chocolate Rain
But test scores are how much the parents make

Chocolate Rain
'Flippin cars in France the other night
Chocolate Rain
Cleans the sewers out beneath Mumbai

Chocolate Rain
'Cross the world and back its all the same
Chocolate Rain
Angels cry and shake their heads in shame

Chocolate Rain
Lifts the ark of paradise in sin
Chocolate Rain
Which part do you think you're 'livin in?

Chocolate Rain
More than 'marchin more than passing law
Chocolate Rain
Remake how we got to where we are


its not that bad if you take out everything that says chocolate rain...

Some stay dry and others feel the pain
A baby born will die before the sin
The school books say it can't be here again
The prisons make you wonder where it went

Build a tent and say the world is dry
Zoom the camera out and see the lie
Forecast to be falling yesterday
Only in the past is what they say

Raised your neighborhood insurance rates
Makes us happy 'livin in a gate
Made me cross the street the other day
Made you turn your head the other way
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#11
Quote by matosh.lee
its not that bad if you take out everything that says chocolate rain...

Some stay dry and others feel the pain
A baby born will die before the sin
The school books say it can't be here again
The prisons make you wonder where it went

Build a tent and say the world is dry
Zoom the camera out and see the lie
Forecast to be falling yesterday
Only in the past is what they say

Raised your neighborhood insurance rates
Makes us happy 'livin in a gate
Made me cross the street the other day
Made you turn your head the other way


I know, but I don't want to, I want to use something new and interesting.
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

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RazorTheAwesome, if I was a Ditto, I'd transform into YOU

Quote by Kensai
Basically god wanted to punish people for getting educated/eating apples.

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We all desire a little pussy.
#12
When I look into your eyes
I can see a love restrained
But darlin' when I hold you
Don't you know I feel the same
'Cause nothin' lasts forever
And we both know hearts can change
And it's hard to hold an ice-cream
In the crispy Chocolate rain

EDIT:Oh you mean same song different lyrics?
My bad...
Last edited by gonzaw at Oct 22, 2008,
#13
Come on people, I need ideas
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

Quote by metaldud536
RazorTheAwesome, if I was a Ditto, I'd transform into YOU

Quote by Kensai
Basically god wanted to punish people for getting educated/eating apples.

Quote by Jackal58
We all desire a little pussy.
#15
Chocolate rain,
Some stay dry and others..... dont..


can anyone link me to the ug albums?
I searched and can't find them.
#16
Quote by 20cdndollars
Chocolate rain,
Some stay dry and others..... dont..


can anyone link me to the ug albums?
I searched and can't find them.


Ahh close enough
and no, sorry dude.
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

Quote by metaldud536
RazorTheAwesome, if I was a Ditto, I'd transform into YOU

Quote by Kensai
Basically god wanted to punish people for getting educated/eating apples.

Quote by Jackal58
We all desire a little pussy.
#18
chocolate rain - im a pedophile.
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#19
Quote by DSchmitty
chocolate rain - im a pedophile.


I'm sure you are
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

Quote by metaldud536
RazorTheAwesome, if I was a Ditto, I'd transform into YOU

Quote by Kensai
Basically god wanted to punish people for getting educated/eating apples.

Quote by Jackal58
We all desire a little pussy.
#20
I like to dance when I take meh trousers off.

There ya go, it even fits with the rhythm
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#23
Chocolate Rain - The searchbar retards don't know how to use [kinda yoda style[do not include this in the phrase]]
Chocolate Rain - But it's a wh0re everyone uses it
#24
Quote by freedoms_stain
I remember the vocals in chocolate rain being better than this.

Maybe time has distorted the memory.


I'm trying to use different lyrics. Written by the pit, also what you said is now in the song.
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

Quote by metaldud536
RazorTheAwesome, if I was a Ditto, I'd transform into YOU

Quote by Kensai
Basically god wanted to punish people for getting educated/eating apples.

Quote by Jackal58
We all desire a little pussy.
#27
Chocolate rain - the LOL WUT pear it only gets you banned

Anyone get the reference??

Post #21....

edit: DAMN YOU MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODS!!!!MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODS!!! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODS!!! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODS!!!![reverb/delay effect]]...!!!!!!!!
Last edited by kevC4 at Oct 23, 2008,
#28
Quote by kevC4
Chocolate rain - the LOL WUT pear it only gets you banned

Anyone get the reference??

Post #21....


Its gone dude, sucks to be him
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

Quote by metaldud536
RazorTheAwesome, if I was a Ditto, I'd transform into YOU

Quote by Kensai
Basically god wanted to punish people for getting educated/eating apples.

Quote by Jackal58
We all desire a little pussy.
#29
get a piano, convert from piano to guitar, play the song in drop C, sing and play the sh*t


DO IT
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#30
Quote by vulcan422
get a piano, convert from piano to guitar, play the song in drop C, sing and play the sh*t


DO IT


Thats what I'm going to do, once I get enough lyrics
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

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RazorTheAwesome, if I was a Ditto, I'd transform into YOU

Quote by Kensai
Basically god wanted to punish people for getting educated/eating apples.

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We all desire a little pussy.
#34
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9-tHAwsPkHo

Rock version's been done, really well too.

(Version with vocals and solo at http://www.myspace.com/ryashon)
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#35
instead of chocolate rain, **** in pain.

****= another name for a rooster starts with a c and ends with k

I'll add one. Chocolate Rain - I kill then rape
grok it.

SKREAM!

Listen to jazz, it's good for you...
#36
Chocolate rain- i just cummed on my toy airplaine
Chocolate rain- i cum chocotale in pain
Chocolate rain- lol lol wut your insane
Chocolate rain- Better than Vanilla Ice
LIFE IS TOO SHORT NOT TO LET YOUR MIND SPREAD WINGS AND TAKE FLIGHT

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#37
Quote by Human Contact
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9-tHAwsPkHo

Rock version's been done, really well too.

(Version with vocals and solo at http://www.myspace.com/ryashon)


I know but I want to do one. I did check that link, that was pretty impressive. I don't have a band so mine is just going to be on guitar and me singing I guess. Plus I am using different lyrics
VERY METAL!
\m/
RIP Ronnie James Dio

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RazorTheAwesome, if I was a Ditto, I'd transform into YOU

Quote by Kensai
Basically god wanted to punish people for getting educated/eating apples.

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We all desire a little pussy.
#39
Want Some Jello Lolol
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#40
For my music class the hw was to write a Gregorian chant. The lyrics to mine were "Chocolate Rain, Some stay dry and others feel the pain"
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