#2
I like it, i'm not much for -core stuff but its well written, i especially liked the interlude
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#3
Nice, specially the prechorus, can u play it on guitar? you should record it I'd like to hear it with a real guitar.
#4
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I like it, i'm not much for -core stuff but its well written, i especially liked the interlude

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#6
that was pretty tight man. i was definitely head bangin. i really like the bassline like, throughout the whole song. very good. the drums are pretty sweet, but i would personally put in more fills after the four bar soloish thingy. but yeah man, keep up the sweet stuff
#7
I wouldn't classify this as metal-core more like straight up metal. Anyways your intro is awesome and through me off because the not note ends quickly lol. I thought it would drag out abit longer. From bars 2-3 I would add a 2nd lead but its fine the way it is. The fade in distortion guitar at 4-5 is a nice touch and at 6 the drum track you laid down on the rests is awesome! The pre-chorus kicked ass! Chorus wasn't repetitive at all and I loved it. The triplets are a nice touch. Verse2 kinda looked like you dosed off bit. 27-31 is a great breakdown. Great song 9/10 GJ!

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