I recently began working on hip-hop and rap beats, and I am currently working on two songs right now. Input, constructive please, would be appreciated:

PS: the name is a pokemon reference; I'm not too serious about this so I don't think I need a serious name yet.
Sounds pretty good so far, let me know if you'd want someone to write lyrics. I've been writing for like 6 years now, I could send you some stuff if interested
This isn't the place to post this.

Nor, Do I like hip-hop... But still, I reckon it sounded pretty good, got some good sounds, keep it up.
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go check out the Riffs and Recordings forum.

please read the rules in there before you post this though.