#1
I recorded this with my phone, I was on a time limit of 30secs.

The first riff and last riff are the two I'm playing around with right now.
The breakdown is just kinda there because I did it for fun(It's not going to stay though), I havn't done anything to make the two "flow" together yet, but what do you guys think of the riffs.

Fairly simple I know.
But I think it sounds cool.
I've been playing for one year about now btw.

My Riff.
Last edited by Coheed777 at Oct 23, 2008,
#2
cool sounding, not very original but still good
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#3
Quote by vegetable-jim
cool sounding, not very original but still good


Thanks, I'm trying to think of what to change to maybe make it a little better and possibly more original and whatnot.