#1
This has a kinda bluesy feel to it......c 4 c.


Go Away

I dont give a damn
about none of your future plans,ya
and i dont really care
if i come home and your not there

so take your clothes and your bags (and go away)
thanks for the good times we had(now just go away)
girl I cant forget you,but atleast let me try to...

Tuesdays gone with the wind
think that its time for a new begin'ng
maybe we can be friends
but that depends how fast you r at getting

so grab your coat and your hat(and go away)
thanks for the good times we had(now just go away)
girl I cant forget you,but atleast let me try to...

when two hearts grow apart and theres noone to blame
you can try to restart but its never the same...

so take your clothes and your bags(and go away)
thanks for the good times we had(now just go away)
girl I cant forget youbut atleast let me try to...
#3
I liked it, overall good flow, however the beginn'ng annoyed me, it doesn't really take a syllable out, and when I try to take the I out it sounds the same as when i leave it in. The bit after that doesn't make sense.

"when two hearts grow apart.." is great flows really well good rhymes, and seems like a good contrast to the verses.