Interesting with the amp sound, but also the sounds from the fretboard, etc.
Is that what you were going for? or was it just a product of how you recorded it?
I can't say I exactly like it, but it's interesting.

I think with a real good recording/mixing and drum part, this would be really cool.
The runs are somewhat repetative, but with some lyrics in there, I'm sure it'd be no problem.
I like the progression from the beginning to middle to end also, it feels very complete.

If you could check out Can You Save Me in my profile, that'd be sweet.
The sound was basically just because the only method of recording I have is a microphone so the quality didn't turn out great, it wasn't intentional or anything like that.

I left you a crit on that song in your song comments in your profile.

Thanks for the crit.
I think it would sound a lot better with drums and bass. It's pretty repetitive in some parts, but I like the sound you have going on, although I wouldn't necessarily call it Egyptian. To me that has more atmospheric elements, like being in a temple or a crypt.
To me, the chord, doodlie-doo, chord pattern needs to be broken up a bit more, like it is around 3:20. Other than that, it sounds pretty good. And since this is crit for crit:
Plz, tell us what you think.
There's some sweet riffs in there and I can hear the egyptian sound come though.. Like the guy said above this would sound alot better with drums and bass. It's a bit Iron maidenish which is always a good thing. Overall though it's was pretty sweet.


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