#1
http://blip.tv/file/1395202/

Tell me what you think. After so much time straight working on it, i hate it but oh well haha.

Im definitely gonna add more heavy stuff after the solo. The song kind of builds to the solo and then dies. Needs moar. Definitely tomorrow.

ill c4c
Last edited by ColinMacIsaac0 at Oct 25, 2008,
#2
Pretty cool man! I can here the makings of a pretty bitchen tune there. I can here some lyrics in places and a pretty cool chorus too. It's all in taste, but what I would do is tone down a little on the double bass drum. It's very cool in places, but in other places it's kind odd and annoying. Just my opinion though.

Keep it up!!

Wade

Crit this when you get a chance please:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=985250
#3
Thanks for the feedback! Im definitely gonna redo a lot of the drums. And rearrange some of the parts. Ill crit yours now.
#4
During the appregiated plucking right after the hard intro,i found the ending notes very annoying. Could be the abrupt stop/tone. Heck maybe its slightly off tune.

I liked the solo though.
And yea chill out on the double bass pedal.


If you wanna C4C, just check out a song on my profile and leave me a comment
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/nunu/

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#5
The melodic part after the intro was good, but some of the ending notes didn't sound quite right. I actually didn't realize that this part was most of the song on the first listen. I was expecting it to go back into the speed picking part after a while, or at least after the solo, which you're right it definitely needs more straight-up heaviness. With a little work, and some better recording, this will be badass.
and since this is C4C:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=984612
#6
Quote by Mr_Quail
The melodic part after the intro was good, but some of the ending notes didn't sound quite right. I actually didn't realize that this part was most of the song on the first listen. I was expecting it to go back into the speed picking part after a while, or at least after the solo, which you're right it definitely needs more straight-up heaviness. With a little work, and some better recording, this will be badass.
and since this is C4C:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=984612


I agree. I was trying to think of a way to go back into heavy/speed picking but i couldnt think of anything. Ill do it today though.