#1
It's just something very short I wrote. It's also my first attempt at a song, so please don't be too harsh.

Troubles (Empathy)

im getting lost in my mind
trying to break free
from my decisions

all the people pass me by
like pictures in a story book,
but the book just wont change the page

now have a little empathy
it's all you need, and all we need
to make the world, a better place

oh just have a little empathy
it's all you need, and all we need
to make your troubles go away

now im getting lost in my heart
not knowing what to love
or what to hate

just come a little closer...
and give me your hand

i need a way out.
#2
actually i quite like it, well done, it's all you need, and all we need
to make the world, a better place. the only squable is that this line will sound a little cheesy, but i do think its quite good, especially for a first song. wheni ts finished tell me so i can hear it