#1
It's my first metalcore intro
i hope it's nice...
Crits, Comments and advices

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Attachments:
Metalcore.zip
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#2
Generic as hell, it sounds just like 90% of other metalcore riffs imo (same tuning, same notes of 3 5 7 8 10 etc)
I don't think bars 17 and onwards really sounded too great either, but maybe that's just how it was tabbed.
However it's a lot better than a lot of other metalcore I've seen people attempt on this site.
Just try and be original with it, it was very predictable
ohai little sig.
#3
Not bad for first time, I liked it actually, but bass sucked at some points, kind of contradicted the guitar parts.
Gallien Krueger is awesome
#4
Demonikk? This song is hardly generic. What metalcore band uses a C#?! It wasn't bad at all man, you definetly got the basic. Head over to my post and check out the drums on it I think it will help you out.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=974448
-Gear-
Mesa Triple Rectifier---Bogner/Line6 SpiderValve---Orange PPC 4x12

-Pedalboard/Rackmount-
Alesis MidiVerb4--BBE SonicMaximizer 442--Ibanez TS9
Boss DD-3--Morley Mark Tremonti Wah

-Guitars-
Ibanez ART-100
Ibanez S-470
#5
ohh i like this, except the intro riff, its too generic but the verse part is pretty nice i say! keep up the good work and if you have some time check mine ^^ its in my sig.