#1
ABSENSE OF DEFINITION

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I'll sing this song tonight
But I'm not sure if I've got the words right
Am I wrong
If I give up this fight
Just tell me what to do so I can make this alright

I'm staring
Out at the world
And I know
That it's not staring back
Because no one cares
Or gives a damn
About anything
Anymore

So make a difference
In this world
I promise it won't be noticed

I'll sing this song
I'll sing it out
No matter what it's about
I hope you hear
I hope you care
But I can't expect anything from you
I can't expect anything from you

Where the hell did they all go
What the hell do they think they know
They don't see whats happening
No one sees whats happening
I guess it's all just happening again

so make a difference
In this world
I promise it won't be noticed

I'll sing this song
I'll sing it out
No matter what it's about
I hope you hear
I hope you care
But I can't expect anything from you
I can't expect anything from you

Everyone's looking forward
No one's looking around
Everyone's hearing the noises
No one's hearing the sounds
Everyone's always rushing
No one takes their time
Everyone's thinking about the rythm
No one thinks of the ryhme

So make a difference
In this world
I promise it won't be noticed

I'll sing this song
I'll sing it out
No matter what it's about
I hope you hear
I hope you care
But I can't expect anything from you
I can't expect anything from you
Yeah I can't expect anything from you!

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This is a song about how nobody cares about anything anymore if you were wondering.
#2
I like it. Its very interesting. Seems a bit long but that is up to you because you wrote it.


Check mine out
Its straight above yours.
#3
Thanks bro

Yeah I write long songs though, this on comes out to about 5 mins I think with the guitar and everything else.

And ok I'll check out yours
#4
you've got a point.
the repetition of "can't expect anything from you" makes it almost a rally cry and really drives the point that alot of people don't care anymore.
very nice.