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(Some lines you can tell are too long, but I can't think of any good lines to replace them with). First piece I've ever completely written and liked somewhat. This is a thrash song in the vein of something like the Skull Beneath the Skin (which the idea is based off of somewhat). The song I mainly wrote out of spite of getting stood up, so in a way, its a rather cynical love song.


Inside your blackened, dark gray cell
The prophets come to take you down
To the pit of sacrifice
Created to appease their crown
Seeing the fear in your eyes
Makes them crack a smile
You wish for mercy
You beg for death
The sadist fiends though are too vile

In the pit of sacrifice, you go
Plunging further, your life is the toll
Feel the flames, as they engulf your soul
It's the last feeling you'll ever know, ha ha ha

Burning hell devours your skin
The heat melts your bone
They dance and sing at the top
As you decay in the fire zone
Bodies lay around like scrap and debris
Their outer shells are useless now
You sense the pain
As the flames strike with fast attack
Death is your final decree

Final decree

In the pit of sacrifice, you go
Plunging further, your life is the toll
Feel the flames, as they engulf your soul
It's the last feeling you'll ever know, ha ha ha

TIA (C4C)
Last edited by xstax981 at Oct 26, 2008,