#1
Well this is my first try ever writing a song or anything of that sort and i'm kinda going for a classic rock, acdc kinda style. don't be too harsh, it was done in maybe an hour.

King of the Hill


(INTRO)

I gotta big black mountain rolling up my back
Daddys driving away in hiss cadilac

all alone; and nowhere to go
have my guitar i'll let it rock n roll!

(VERSE 1a)

Running away with nowhere to jam
the club hosts a rock n roll man
looks at me his then head starts to stir
looks back down then his guitar starts to pur


(CHORUS)

the man gives green then i know
this is my time, and i'm gonna show
that i'm never ever gonna-
never gonna stop (echo) stop stop stop....-
TILL I GET TO THE TOP!!!!!

Yes im gonna be the king of the hill!
No o'ding on mah pill!
i might be different- i may not play scales
but when im done youll be giving mai hails!


(VERSE 1b)

City's bopping, in front of me
jammng down the streets, of columba DC


i'm doing my thing, playing my song
man walks up to me with a pipe and a bong

i'm in big bad, big bad dc
he sees my rig, then walks away in glee


(CHORUS)

City gives me the green, this i just know
this is my time, and i'm gonna show
that i'm never gonna- no i'm not gonna-
never gonna stop! (echo) stop stop stop....-
TILL I GET TO THE TOP!!!!!

Yes im gonna be the king of the hill!
Not o'ding on my pill!
i might be different- i may not play scales
but when im done youll be giving me hails!


(BREAKDOWN)

ooooo i'llbe the king of the hill
not od'ing on pills!!!!
i'll let it rock
and i'll let it roll-
BUt listen here- i'll sell you my soul!!!

(GUITAR SOLO 1)

(BRIDGE)

THIS IS MY TIME!!!!!
YES THIS IS MY TIME TO SHOW!!!
ROCK N ROLL, IT'S THE WAY FOR ME TO GO!!!!!!
YEAHHEAHHEAH!!!! MY TIME!!! THIS IS MY TIME!!

OWH!!!


(GUITAR SOLO 2)


(VERSE 2)

this is my time, and i'm going to show
that i'm never gonna- no i'm not gonna -
never gonna stop until get to that top!

Yes im gonna be the king of the hill!
Not o'ding on my pill!
i might be different- i may not play scales
but when im done youll be giving me hails!

BAck in my land, yes MAYYAYAYAYYYY!!! land
They cheer in the stands, ow my stands!

YOUR THE KING OF THE HILL!!!
KING OF THE HILL!!
Yeah your the king of the hill!
KING OF THE HILL!!!

(OUTRO)

OH!!
OH!!
OH!!

And i...
didn't o.d....
on ma....
pillllsssssss yeah.
"You know it's funny when it rains it pours
...They got money for wars, but can't feed the poor"


Techno artist and rap producer in training

Last edited by BelowZero at Oct 26, 2008,
#2
I saw the word "glee". You lose.
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I loled
#3
not a bad first effort, the only thing im not sure about is the second part of your chorus, i dont think the line about the pill fits the chorus very well