Wrote it today still a work in progress. What do you guys and girls think?
Any advice or tips wouold help.

It is currently in my profile.

C4C Like Always.
Last edited by 13secondslater at Oct 26, 2008,
I think it's sweet!

BTW, what does C4C stand for?
My Gear
Electrics - Ibanez RG370DX
Acoustics - Takamine EG510SC, Victoria Classic
Pedals - Ibanez WD7, Marshall ED1, Digitech DF7, Boss AC3, Marshall RG1, Digitech XDD
Amplifiers - Laney HCM15R, Roland Micro Cube
In all honesty, the riff seems fairly generic and boring - but then again, I'm not really a fan of riff-based music. I think it has potential, and it would probably sounds really good in a full band setting, but at the moment it just doesn't sound too strong to me.

If you've got some time check out some of my acoustic solo stuff. Let me know what you think here: http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=914968&page=1&pp=20