#1
Occupo Dies:
To seize the day
While somewhere in the eastern world
Soldiers fight over false threats

Alo Moment:
To cherish the moment
While somewhere much too close
Gangs litter the streets with chaos

Intereo Per Veneratio:
To die with honor
While behind our backs
Murder breeds rabidly

Haud Commodo Subsisto
The last words spoken...

Her face so covered with blood...

His head hung
A trophy on my wall.
#2
i like this.

abrupt
thought provoking
gaps
Meadows
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#3
I like how it is set up

Latin
Translation
Story
Story

The stories are examples of somewhat bastardized versions of the phrase
Go out and fight for what you believe in now
but why you are fighting is inherently false

However, I do not know the context of "last command spoken"
so I cannot interpret the ending

besides that I think it is a wonderful piece

well, another thing
your phrasings seem to be awkward
(occupy the day instead of capture the day
perhaps that is part of the bastardization I mentioned)
Lord Gold feeds from your orifices and he wants to see you sweat.
Lord Gold probes you publicly and makes your pussy wet.
Now say his name.....
Last edited by lordofthefood1 at Oct 26, 2008,
#4
Quote by Papa Luigi
Carpe Diem:
To seize the day
While somewhere in the eastern world
Soldiers fight over false threats

Alo Moment:
To cherish the moment
While somewhere much too close
Gangs litter the streets with chaos

Intereo Per Veneratio:
To die with honor
While behind our backs
Murder breeds rabidly

Fides Punica


The last words spoken...

Her face so covered with blood...

His head hung

A trophy on my wall.
(Quemadmoeum gladis nemeinum occidit, occidentis telum est)



fixed it up
thanks for the positive crit
Last edited by Papa Luigi at Mar 11, 2009,