#1
This is my second Metalcore Intro
I hope it's nice^^

C4C!!
Attachments:
Metalcore2.zip
R.I.P.
Chuck Schuldiner 1967-2001
Ronnie James Padavona 1942-2010
Darrell Lance Abbott 1966-2004
Jon Nödtveidt 1975-2006
Per Yngve Ohlin 1969-1991
Øystein Aarseth 1968-1993
Joe Ptaceck 1973-2010
Ace Börje Thomas Forsberg 1966-2004
#2
acoustic intro is pretty nice! wow. intro riff is good, but the drums are shit in it first verse is niceee. prechorus is fkin good with the harmonizing. yeah i'd imagine a melodic harmonized chorus for it. write it, gogogo! ^^ 9/10 for now
plz crit my latest in my sig


-- see you've already done it ^^
#5
I loved it, very solid.
All the parts were melodic and flowed nicely.

The riff from bar 25 and on is awesome
9/10
#6
nice..seems very professional... drums are ok..would sound better in life (of course) like the little harmonizing at the end....

c4c?
do the song in my sig plz
Just call me Julius, J, etc.
Taking an Internet break for a while, will come on when I can.
#8
oh i've already finished this song time ago!
I attach it now.
Attachments:
Metalcore-Screamo Song 1.zip
R.I.P.
Chuck Schuldiner 1967-2001
Ronnie James Padavona 1942-2010
Darrell Lance Abbott 1966-2004
Jon Nödtveidt 1975-2006
Per Yngve Ohlin 1969-1991
Øystein Aarseth 1968-1993
Joe Ptaceck 1973-2010
Ace Börje Thomas Forsberg 1966-2004
#10
yes, i've posted it like 5 month ago lol, but if you want to crit you're free to do it
R.I.P.
Chuck Schuldiner 1967-2001
Ronnie James Padavona 1942-2010
Darrell Lance Abbott 1966-2004
Jon Nödtveidt 1975-2006
Per Yngve Ohlin 1969-1991
Øystein Aarseth 1968-1993
Joe Ptaceck 1973-2010
Ace Börje Thomas Forsberg 1966-2004