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Melodic Death Metal Intro and Bridge PLus Lyrics for song


The lIght That Was

and there was light
and the world was destroyed
and the poele were annoyed

and there was......

THe evil
that was creeping under
teh fire
that is raging over
teh lightning
that is striking donw the poor
that was then and this is no more

and there was pain
and the world was enrage
and the pole engaged

and there was...

THe evil
that was creeping under
teh fire
that is raging over
teh lightning
that is striking donw the poor
that was then and this is no more

and there was dust
that blinded the world
that burned up the pagans

and there was...

THe evil
that was creeping under
teh fire
that is raging over
teh lightning
that is striking donw the poor
that was then and this is no more
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Last edited by bbenman at Oct 26, 2008,
#4
horribly generic
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#5
if you're going to write out the lyrics at least spell them properly - and the file you uploaded is empty. Plus, I really think you need to think these through a bit more:

"and the world was destroyed
and the poele were annoyed"

I assume that means people? Even aside from the painful attempt to find any word to rhyme with destroyed, I'd imagine people would be a bit more than annoyed at the apocalypse...

As burn the stars suggests, look at other bands lyrics (and their music), study it - what they do that works and WHY it works and then come back