#1
I would just like to dedicate this next song to my favourite politician....HA HA HA HA

Twinkle Twinkle little star
Let us show them who they are
Fill their heads with all our lies
And take the sparkle from their eyes
Twinkle twinkle little star
Let us ruin them from a far!
#4
Capt_Clarkson, you've been reported.


Lucky Fish, this is a derivative parody. they can be fun, but this one shows little effort.
the rhymes are forced, and the message is muddy.
try a little harder to make a statement.
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#5
I'm sorry but I didn't find this very clever. Try to use different words, both to make them more specific to the politician you're talking about (make an allusion) and to make use of what little room you have to express yourself. Since this is short, your rhythm is limited, and two of the lines are from the original song, you'll have to make each of your own words as effective as possible.
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