#2
Not great recording quality, weird shifts in tone throughout the song. Your voice is good. Very calming and raw. I think you need something more, the song needs a memorable chorus or something. It pretty solid though its a good blueprint to start a better, more developed song. The solo is good too, very good mood.

please check out mine as well, thatd be great, thanks!
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=986673