This is the first complete song, still on the rough, that I've ever made (lyrics and all) and it's like 5 minutes long. Metallica's "One" was my inspiration on making this song. I also kinda messed up on the intro a little but, but w/e..

I'd like some crits and feedbacks and would gladly crit other's work. Feel free to crit and rate my other covers too! Thanks!

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Last edited by ZeroChan at Oct 28, 2008,