#1
Taking down signs that say sold.
I put a whole right through my wall.
Everything happens for a reason,
Is what I'm told.

Gave into faith,
What it gave me,
Another thought to think
Before I sleep.
A few rosery beads.

Others have it much worse
But it all comes from the same source
Snow melting, uncovering brown grass
That we can't seem to see,
Behind every fence we pass.
Quote by ottoavist

i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror
#2
Elusive
but not in a bad way


The first line is great. I think it's creative. And it sounds like fun

Taking down signs that say sold.

Is "whole" a typo ? I like the idea of confusion if it's not a typo, but I think it's being too blunt.

I put a whole right through my wall.

The next two lines seem kinda cliche, but I liked it

Everything happens for a reason,
Is what I'm told.

This verse is my favorite. I really like the phrasing and how it leaves the verse open for interpretation

Gave into faith,
What it gave me,
Another thought to think
Before I sleep.
A few rosery beads.

This last verse is vague in it's meaning, but kept my interest enough to warrant a few extra go arounds.

Others have it much worse
But it all comes from the same source
Snow melting, uncovering brown grass
That we can't seem to see,
Behind every fence we pass.


I Really like your word usage, but I feel it should have more focus. Just a smidgen


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