#1
Please crit,
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Guitarplaya27

yay
sorry about the aftersolo part
otherwise, crit me,
crit 4 crit
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#3
How long you been playing?
Ya i think you have the right notes, just work more on timing, your timing seemed to be off alot. Also that main fast riff, your missing some notes i think it does what you did twice really fast, like A-5 8 D-6 A-5 8 D-6
#4
You're doin alright, just work on your fret hand timing and the connection between the pick and fret hands.

The notes are solid and the melodies are there, just gotta synch up a tad.
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#5
Alright,
ive been playin 3 years but i dont get the chance of everyday sometimes not even a week of playing

but i have just learnt this song,
and ill probably record it again
but thanks
Call me Sean
Quote by Nilpferdkoenig
He's just trying to protect our innocence.


Yes i am
Quote by :Vicious--

Your flirting powers are incredible.



Gear:
Schecter S1 Elite Black Cherry (Soapbar Neck, Invader Bridge)
Schecter Banshee
Orange Dual Terror
Boss CE-5
Goatkeeper
#6
I love your guitar. That said, you may want to play along with the song to get the timing down.
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