#2
To be honest im not into the stle of singing but it might be the folk rock thing too..
Still its well put together and formed and deserves to be heard by someone actuall into it.
Im not in a possition to judge honestly but its good to me.

Crit my song?
#4
to join everyone else in chorus... its not my style either. But the guitar playing is pretty good and pretty cool. I wish there was a chorus that really stood out, something that would change the mood up a little bit. I notice repitition that make it memorable. I think its a cool song even though im not into this style.

Please check mine out: Thanks!
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=986673
#5
[quote="'[BurnTheDusk"]']To be honest im not into the stle of singing but it might be the folk rock thing too..
Still its well put together and formed and deserves to be heard by someone actuall into it.
Im not in a possition to judge honestly but its good to me.

Crit my song?
Thanks for your time..

I'll be leaving the shop in about 25 minutes, head ho,e, get something to eat and i'll drop in and give you a listen..
#6
Quote by Divided_Eye
well done. not my style either, but i can appreciate it.


Thanks for your ear..

I liked your poem. Reminded me of this lil Beatnik coffee shop I used to hang out at back in the day.
#7
Quote by frusziger26
to join everyone else in chorus... its not my style either. But the guitar playing is pretty good and pretty cool. I wish there was a chorus that really stood out, something that would change the mood up a little bit. I notice repitition that make it memorable. I think its a cool song even though im not into this style.

Please check mine out: Thanks!
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=986673


Thanks for the thoughts. This song still is pending a re-mix.

In just a bit I will be heading home and I will absolutly give you a play and some feedback.

Thanks again.