#1
This is my new song, Alegria.
Alegria means "joy" in spanish.
Only one line of the song are in spanish so maybe you can give it a view.

Alegrίa

Today I took a dive into your soul
I struggled through the hate to reach the love
Every time I walk into your eyes
I can find the child I’m longing for

Molding a new universe
You use the peace as clay
Building up New Berlin Walls
Won’t take us anyway
There is one solution
And we’re just playing the blind
A moral revolution
That love will stand behind

The day we feel ok to look inside
Inside ourselves subconsciously and bright
We’ll find out why we torture our existence
We’ll be better people and reborn

Workers using stars for hammers
Mothers feeding babies hope
Children teaching old men manners
Days that start but never stop
Molding a new universe
A moral revolution
Building up New Berlin Walls
Is not a real solution

Todos lό que necesitamos son algunos momentos de l’Alegrίa
Todos lό que necesitamos son algunos momentos de Paz
Every form of control over another person is a crime

AEK Athens
Asteras Exarcheion
Prasini Thyella
Rayo Vallecano

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#2
I do not really understand the refrain

besides that, it seems like quite a wonderful, somewhat sing-a-long type piece
something that would be heard at a mellow Spanish get together
(and they sing the last two lines all through out the night)


it seems like it is written towards something like
"children are the hope in the future"

or something.
Lord Gold feeds from your orifices and he wants to see you sweat.
Lord Gold probes you publicly and makes your pussy wet.
Now say his name.....
#3
the refrain says

All we need is some moments of Joy

all we need is some moments of peace.

Thank you
Every form of control over another person is a crime

AEK Athens
Asteras Exarcheion
Prasini Thyella
Rayo Vallecano

RED MILITIA-Vamos a Vencer
#4
Quote by KenMasters
the refrain says

All we need is some moments of Joy

all we need is some moments of peace.

Thank you

Oh, I didn't mean refrain then ;
I misread both of the stanzas mentioning a "New Berlin Wall"
Lord Gold feeds from your orifices and he wants to see you sweat.
Lord Gold probes you publicly and makes your pussy wet.
Now say his name.....
#5
"Workers using stars for hammers
Mothers feeding babies hope
Children teaching old men manners
Days that start but never stop"

That is EXCELLENT. I love the message, and the ryhmes connect really well. Best part of the song.

I am, I am, I am.
#6
Really good man. I agree that I could find myself singing along with this at a friendly get together, someone snatches up a guitar and plays this. Very good, keep it up dude. Looking forward to more stuff like this from you.
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