#1
Something I threw together pretty quick. It's in the style of like a slow acoustic team sleep song. Let me know what you think. C4C

One day I saw this girl in the park, she looked like she was confused
I looked at her and said please explain, She just stared at the ground
And said I don’t know why I’m even here.

I hate my life I want to go on without this
These things that make me feel so unwanted
I have no friends, I have no family
The thing that keeps me here is you

On my way home I got to thinking, maybe this girls got more to say
So I go back to where I met her, she says to me I can’t explain
Why I’m even here today

I hate my life I want to go on without this
These things that make me feel so unwanted
I have no friends, I have no family
The thing that keeps me here is you

Weeks go by since I have seen her, till she’s on my tv
The cop says girl what’s on your mind? She gazed at the street below
and said I’ll tell you why I’m here today.

I hate my life I want to go on without this
These things that make me feel so unwanted
I have no friends, I have no family
The thing that keeps me here is you

I make my way down to the building, to see her way up there
I yell to her what are you doing? She looked at me and said
You’re the thing that keeps me here

I hate my life I want to go on without this
These things that make me feel so unwanted
I have no friends, I have no family
The thing that keeps me here is you

You saved my life by being, the friend that I never had.
Fender Fat Strat (Arctic White w/ maple neck)
Alvarez AD62SC
Vox AD30VT
#2
It's hard to tell, if the lyrics are good, depends on the music and how the are sung.
But I can't see a rhyme scheme or something like that, so it would be pretty hard to squeeze the lyrics into a song