Here is my newest original. I can up with the intro part while listening to some brutal Ulver black metal, and the rest just came along. I got new tone and everything, except the acoustic, which still sucks because it's my ghetto homemade piezo. Some of the lead parts sound HORRIBLE because the intonation on my guitar is utter crap and I can't figure out how to fix it. I think this will be the first track on my EP... if I ever make more songs to put on an EP lol
So comment and crit the tone and production and everything you can, I'd appreciate it.