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another tune from little me

this time I'm experimenting with a little more tracks than usual, giving me some interesting results..

well.. enjoy

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Good, but work more on the solo, it's dissonant and very simple
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Strings can't go that high.

There is nothing wrong with a simple solo, listen to David Gilmour, however, I agree with the dissonant part. Dissonance can be used well sometimes, but wasn't in this case. I'm not sure how much of it was in key, also, it was possibly a bit long for my liking. If someone can write solos very well then I'm happy for them to go that long but it doesn't sound like you can (no offence).

The main problem through out all of this was just notes were clashing. It's not a bad piece, but look through the parts. It is frustrating when you have a lot of instruments to go through it all and try change parts, but I think some of them could be done in a completely different way.