#1
Ok so earlier today I uploaded 2 of my songs on my UG profile, they're short.
Untitled 1 is a song I wrote last night and I want crit before I continue writing it, it's fingerpicked and uses tapped notes, sorry about the volume and it only comes out of the left speaker for me.

Untitled 2 is a song I wrote a little while ago and it's not complete, I use generic chords but I change some notes around in it so you'll hear a riff sort of thing.
I just want crit on both, I don't really like both songs that much but I rely on peoples crit alot and remember I play bass not guitar.
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