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Criticism good/constructive appreciated

Opposition We Invite

Light the torch
Pour the Gasoline
Mix flame and fuel,
Watch as the city’s reduced to
But a ghost
Of what it once was,
Like the people who lived there not so long ago

We prowl these streets that we call ours
We brandish these weapons that we call ours
Shatter these windows with bricks and with tables,
Burn out these houses with fuses and fire
Wear our hearts on the sleeves of the coats we're not wearing,
We will never back down
We will be here ‘till the end.


Shut remaining windows,
Throw away the key
Barricade the doors
To all humanity
Sit back
Relax
Wait for gunfire to end,
Take out the soldiers on foot,
Or whoever they've sent

We run these streets that we call ours
We brandish these weapons that we call ours
Shatter these windows with bricks and with tables,
Burn out these houses with fuses and fire
Wear our hearts on the sleeves of the coats we're not wearing,
We will never back down
We will be here ‘till the end.


We'll arm ourselves with pitchforks
Opposition we invite
In destruction, torture and pain we take particular delight
The ground we stand won’t move an inch,
Your concrete walls are 3 metres thick
We're the insurgents of the city,
We are the insurgents of the city

We've taken it one step too far,
Crossed the one-way line
Arranged in front of the wall
And shot one at a time
You can't rebuild your houses,
Replace your windows
Your lives are ****,
Replace the ones you traded for ours

We prowl these streets that we call ours
We brandish these weapons that we call ours
Shatter these windows with bricks and with tables,
Burn out these houses with fuses and fire
Wear our hearts on the sleeves of the coats we're not wearing,
We will never back down
We will be here ‘till the end.
My current acoustic group:

Fiftieth Parallel

Martin Guitars
Elixer Strings
Acoustic amplification
BOSS pedals

Last edited by jon93971 at Apr 26, 2009,
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Shifted, You will be Launched,
OR
shift it; you will be extiunguished,( The word for killing a flame with water, It's wrong spelled, but I hope you know what I mean,)
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Quote by therealtater
I really liked this it was one of the best I have read in a while, even though this is my first time on in two weeks....

Any improvements at all you might make??
Anything is good
My current acoustic group:

Fiftieth Parallel

Martin Guitars
Elixer Strings
Acoustic amplification
BOSS pedals